I was waiting to hear some feedback on this from some closer to home sources, but I’ve been somewhat let down and heard nothing back.

This is the first draft of my history for the Blood Guard home-brew chapter and it would be great to hear some thoughts on it.

I know of a couple of mistakes in it already that I need to reword; use of the term compliance, for example – but I thought I would put it out there incase anyone else wanted to give it a read? I am sure it will be riddled with spelling and grammar issues as well, so be warned!

It’s in .odt file, not sure how much of an issue that will be for readers, if it is a real dilemma just let me know and I shall rework it somehow.

[Edit] Now also avaliable in PDF format!